Oh, sorry. See I said paragraph skills to give you the benefit of the doubt, because as an outline that was truly atrocious. You try and be nice...
Wow, you really need to learn the difference between an outline, and outlining. They are not the same thing.
If you weren't such an officious ass you might get that.
A serious question to the moderators:
Is there a reason why this guy is still allowed here, other than for entertainment purposes?